Forbidden Future Script 1

_{This is a download, not a html or webpage full of text. I find my .pdf copy more easily readable than anything I could get done on dA. And it looks nicer too!}

Giants. The world has been taken over by Giants. The world didn't end in fire or ice or from a solar flare or global warming.

Humanity reaches its end when one of its greatest enemies re-awakens from their ancient slumber. And they won.

She is looking for some last vestige of humanity, some place where she can have her baby and live in peace. If some place like that exists, in a world filled with Giants and gigantic animals and vermin...

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PART TWO
PART THREE

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So this is the first five pages of a comic I've been working on for =temiel, and I figured it was time to post it on dA for some feedback. I'm uncertain as to when any actual comic will be done, mainly because the script is still being written. But, hey, your feedback on this can help.

First, I need eyes other than my own to read the words. That alone gets me to work more stuff out. There are a total of twenty-two pages written. Its unfinished and I don't expect =temiel to be working on it for awhile.

Second, any critiques or mistakes caught by anyone who reads this will be much appreciated. It helps me to perfect the piece as I go along.

As for the visual component, I'll probably commission =temiel to do a page or two in the near future if only to get an idea of how she translates my script- that way I can adjust my scripts to make things easier for her in the future I hope.

Anyway, enough ranting. Adios!


<sub>Art by =temiel use allowed for a non-commercial purpose as per her commission rules;

Mother-to-Be is a creation of my madness.</sub>